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lets pretend
written by trulybroken5703:59 PM 12/23/04lets pretend
its all a game,
nothing matters,
no rules at all.
lets pretend,
just for a moment
that no one cares
about what you think.
now lets pretend
everyone's perfect,
without a flaw.
lets pretend
to be loved
and to give love.
pretend you're not really here.
it's all just a game,
a lonely, pathetic game
of lets pretend,
a faking game
where everyone hides
who they really are.
i dont want
to play anymore,
i quit. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
have u ever felt like the world isnt real, that its all just a game? please comment
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| » Comments / Feedback | by genuinely_fake (12-23-2004 - 04:27 PM)
| wow. this is a really good poem.and yes, i do feel like that sometimes... |
by utmosthater (12-23-2004 - 05:39 PM)
| i don't want to play anymore, i quit.
thats so great :) its really good |
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