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Courage(COMMENTS)
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk10:45 PM 12/23/04I hold the blade tightly in my hand.
I press down on my skin, as hard as I think I can.
A line of blood forms, but it's just not enough.
I press harder then before the blade is so rough.
I cut more and more, everything seems so tough.
I hide all my scars under a LP wrist cuff.
I hide my pain as well, no one knows the truth.
That I have all these emotional shutdowns and you seem to be the root.
Agian I feel like shit, and agian I get the urge.
I pray for all this to stop, I pray for courage. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I know the ending doesn't rhyme to well, that's the only problem ran into.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by wmctalon (12-23-2004 - 11:45 PM)
| really good poem! i can really feel the emotion in it, and it's still good even if the end doesn't rhyme :) keep writing! |
by ieatsmellysocks (12-24-2004 - 12:23 AM)
| Nice poem!And you could always change urge to something like discourage or something.Or you could just leave it. |
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