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What I'm going through(comment on please
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk03:53 AM 12/24/04You think you know me
you haven't got a clue.
You think you understand me
and everything I do.
When you really don't know what's going on in your own life.
You don't understand what it's like, to loose every fight.
When all the battles are agianst yourself, and you still can't win.
And everyone's expecting you do blow it, and you just give in.
When no one can honestly say ,that they believe in you.
That's when you'll understand exactly what I'm going through. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I blew it agian, and my "friends" claim to understand. PLEASE COMMMENT
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| » Comments / Feedback | by LilCoin (12-24-2004 - 04:01 AM)
| i can completely relate to this it's awesome!! :) |
by _acceptable_loss_ (12-24-2004 - 04:03 AM)
| i can really relate. . . good poem |
by (anonymous) (12-24-2004 - 04:31 AM)
| so this is what you are going thru? it's a very good poem..i really like it! it's sad tho cuz you're going through it..i think that maybe you should try and show those people up..give them a reason to think twice next time they don't believe in you..but in order for your friends to believe in you..first you gotta believe in yourself hun..i'm not saying you don't..but it seems that way~ i hope everything gets better for you! remember this tho..someone somewhere believes in you. someone loves you. knows u. cares about you. someone is going through the same as you..you just gotta be strong. prove people wrong and not give up.
~ Ashley..
if you wanna reply to this my email is ashley1728@hotmail.com |
by (anonymous) (1-1-2005 - 10:37 PM)
| i read some of ur poems and i think they are all beautiful ... i can relate to them in so many ways .. Life suxs and fuck everyone cuz in the end u just end up getting hurt |
by Keora the goddess of ice (1-5-2005 - 08:50 PM)
| that was great. my life is like that.
Keora |
by (anonymous) (1-18-2005 - 04:09 AM)
| i believe in you cassie!...mary yet again....you have a lot of potential....i love you!! |
by (guest) (2-5-2005 - 01:31 AM)
| hey i wuz reading some of ur poems i do like them but i hate the pain u have im rele srry but i do under stand even though mi life aint that bad but mi sisters is n its pretty much like urs the reportcard(dido) arguin and stuff with ur mom n stuff
but i do under stand cuz 3 ppl died in one year she has no fuckin clue n ya well mi "friends" too dont understand and mi life sucks too other n diffrent ways n well ur not alone
if u want im me ihrtSOVS
ok well ya
bye |
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