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Take over me(COMMENTS)
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk08:09 AM 12/24/04What can I do,
what can I say.
Nothing's good enough for you,
Attempted perfection in so many ways.
What am I aiming at
what am I trying to be?
I don't want this to last,
not knowing who really is me.
What's going on in there,
inside that brain of mine.
It seems completely bare.
Loneiness must be a state of mind.
Since that's all I am,
that's all I see.
A lonely human being here I stand,
waiting for you to take over me. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by forgotten-suicide (12-25-2004 - 10:29 PM)
| wow. well I am so lost between me and my two others. so don't feel alone, i bet if you look hard enough someone will find you weather it is someone in your mind or maybe someone who can actually care for you. |
by (anonymous) (1-18-2005 - 04:19 AM)
| mary again-i member you read me this one, u should put that one rickety bridge top one on there you kno the one that made me cry? that was a good one |
by XsouredXfaithX (2-11-2005 - 11:58 PM)
| dont try to be perfect you never will be |
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