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please save me
written by trulybroken5703:45 PM 12/24/04i run to you
scared, weak and weary,
hoping that
you can make
the pain go away
and save me
from myself.
i am crying,
lost and confused,
i don't know
where i am.
the grey sky is
weighing down upon
my shoulders,
i can't go on.
i need someone
to save me,
help me through
the darkest of times
and i pray
that someone
will be you |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
have you ever lost yourself, to have someone bring you back, and they dont even know it?
please comment
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| » Comments / Feedback | by coax_and_destroy (12-24-2004 - 04:12 PM)
| i love youre poem.. i love youre footnote too.. i love all youre poems and footnotes.. its like watching a show then the commercial comes on and says... "have you ever experienced this if so we would love to hear youre story please call us at 1-800-555-5555" sorry im a smartass i know.. i still love it though.. keep it up sparky btw that is a compliment... my guitar is named sparky.. and the other one is pig.. even tho i like pig more.. sparky is still the special... |
by coax_and_destroy (12-24-2004 - 04:13 PM)
| ^one.. i kinda forgot a word :| |
by somethingcorporate (12-29-2004 - 01:31 AM)
| if you need anything...just tell me. i'll do anything. i don't want anything to happen to you. |
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