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Suicidal teens
written by Genocide Reaper04:49 AM 12/25/04| Kids having fun with guns to the skull, children that cannot seem to deal with this life so they run. I hear gun shots, I see blood stains. I see streets filled with water from the rain. Tears of God, cried for their lifeless choices! Suicidal teens! Lost all reasons, couldn't find a living, they lost the means. Little kids playing with blades, slicing, cutting, fucking their own hearts with a cold knife, do you hear it? How they all ask Why, and cannot help but seem to die. Its called suicide. They drown their sorrow in thoughts of no tomorrow. We live, we fight, we give up, we die. Those who do not continue the constant battle, baffle the teachers, as they seem to learn a new lesson, of self inflicted murder. Suicide, a spreading of a disease through out the teens, parents can't take the sight, they go blind. Christians ask why. I say Happy birthday Christ, I'll rape your momma show you your real Dad. Its me, I'm their despair, their suicide, isn't it so much easier to blame their self inflicted murder on me! Then to really SEE! Its their own LIVES! not just my WORDS! They lack the WORKS! Work, stay occupied, boredom is suicide! Might as well just commit homicide! Help spread the genocide! |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (12-25-2004 - 04:57 AM)
| this is good! i can't help but ask, have you ever tried it? you know suicide |
by (anonymous) (12-25-2004 - 05:35 AM)
| best fuckin poem i have ever read |
by DragonWingedWolf (12-25-2004 - 06:38 AM)
| You are true, but if your poem was ment to show guidence to the suicidal teens the meaning was lost as they do not listen well.... |
by lost_cause (12-25-2004 - 08:41 PM)
| To - Genuinly_fake - You stupid bastard... You can write however you want... it doesn't have to be in stanza's... Genocide it is and awesome POEM... I liked it alot! |
by forgotten-suicide (12-25-2004 - 10:57 PM)
| Dito to lostcause. That was a beautiful and awsome poem. It explains a lot.anyone who reads it should listen. |
by (anonymous) (12-27-2004 - 04:39 AM)
| Awesome poem. Genuinely_fake shut the hell up. You could never write anything as beautiful as that. |
by (anonymous) (12-27-2004 - 07:13 AM)
| I loved it. Wonderful poem. well besides the whole Christ part. Genuinley_fake is a pathetic writer who probably write genuinely fake poems. Great work keep it up.
*Carrie |
by Erix (12-27-2004 - 08:00 AM)
| Genuinely fake rape off you fag
Genocide awesome poem man that kicked ass |
by unholy_soldier13 (12-28-2004 - 02:17 AM)
| i got to say, that is amazing. you are a very talented poet. |
by butterflyeffect (12-28-2004 - 06:25 AM)
| Damn! Look at all these ppl kissing your ass... must be nice. Well kissing ass was never my thing so I'll simply say"good work"... as always :) |
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