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s i l e n t SCREAMS!
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk10:20 AM 12/25/04Why isn't anyone listening I'm screaming at the top of my lungs!
I've asked for help but you shut be down, look what I've become.
Don't feed me this crap, I don't wanna hear anymore of your lies.
Don't say you had no idea, you're part of my life!
How could you not notice when it's written all over my face.
If you cannot see what I am showing to you, how are you my friend in the first place?
The truth not be hidden, you just don't want to get in between.
In between what? the battle agianst myself and me?
I'm fighting no one, I only hurt myself.
Though no one cares to help, so im stuck continuing to yell. |
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CAN YOU HEAR ME NOW? shit....
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| » Comments / Feedback | by EvilTiger (12-25-2004 - 11:05 AM)
| This peom feels real to me also.[xtreme poem]F*ck those who hate it. |
by X6suicidalxthoughts9x (12-25-2004 - 05:51 PM)
by blackgothicblood (12-25-2004 - 06:25 PM)
| awsome poem yea it really sucks when everyone is always ignoring you and then they say they don't understand right after you just held the answer right in front of their face |
by forgotten-suicide (12-25-2004 - 10:26 PM)
| ditdo to blackgothicblood. I have been there damn people who are so ignorant. and they call us crazy. |
by (anonymous) (12-26-2004 - 09:25 PM)
| you'd be surprised who's listening |
by Trapezium (12-29-2004 - 06:24 PM)
| I'm really glad that one of your poems is on the front page, you deserve it. Your poems deserve it. You're a good poet, this is a good poem. Oh, and anon's right. "Even when there's silence you're still listening to something" |
by (anonymous) (1-18-2005 - 04:36 AM)
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