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» Poem: Time to let go
Time to let go
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
01:26 AM 12/26/04
Holding on to the bar,I feel so weak, pathetic and useless
I think of what it will be like when im gone, all of you are so clueless.
To believe I was actually okay when you aksed me how I was.
To make me think everything will get beter, when nothing ever does.
The wind blows up agianst my face speaking softly in my ear.
Loud enough for me to understand, now everthing seems so clear.
To end my problems I must let go.
Let go of my pain and my suffering that no one knows.
Let go of the people who get in my way.
Let go of the bar, and let the wind take me away.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Let go to be free..Please leave comments...it's really not that difficult.

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» Comments / Feedback
by The_sad_girl (12-26-2004 - 01:28 AM)
very good

by _acceptable_loss_ (12-26-2004 - 01:57 AM)
really good poem

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