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» Poem: You're Pretty When You Scream
You're Pretty When You Scream
written by fuzzypunkhat
06:54 AM 12/26/04
Lashing out at everyone my emotions just got cut from my nerve,
I'm driving this insanity in my car,
I almost hit another one but I swirved,
Shut up already I didn't do anything yet,
Those shining tears that led down your cheeks,
Made me smile yet frown in my corvette,
A pretty car with two pretty girls,
One in the front seat,
The other in the back everything gone wrong in her world,
Those sparkling dots of aqua that covered her face,
Made me smile yet frown,
It hurt me though she needed her space,
And I just screwed that up by trying to make her feel better,
I felt it was the only way though,
Because she ignored my last letter,
I stop at the cliff and pull her out gently by her hand,
I wanted her to see what I had wanted for her and me,
That beautiful ocean below us as we stood upon the sand,
She was whining a bit then sniffling she was to my amaze,
She put her arms around me,
But she was a disgrace,
I let her off I knew she was sucking up to me,
She thought I was going to hurt her,
Was I, was I not, was this meant to be?
I pulled out the knife,
Put her on the ground,
I pressed my lips to hers and said,"Good night."
The moon began to let its rays shine upon us both,
I loved her but she turned her back,
My love could spread with her from coast to coast,
I carefully tickled her stomach with the edge of the blade,
I saw her cry more as it gently let loose some blood,
Her tears let loose incredibly in a big cascade,
Closer in I let the edge lean,
Deeper cutting her stomach,
She yelled and I said,"You know, You're pretty when you scream."


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by blackgothicblood (12-26-2004 - 08:00 AM)
thats a very good poem but if you don't mind me asking who is it that you had all this love for not to be rude

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