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Poor little kid (corporate)
written by Genocide Reaper
11:35 AM 12/28/04
You scream, I scream, the little scared bitch creams. Stalking my prey, as I can hear her whisper and pray, she begs Christ to save her life, for tonight, she knows is her last, for the Reaper is stalking her, and he is moving rather fast. I slip the blade to her throat, in front of the young boy holding her hand. To allow her son to watch, the savage rage of a demon unleashed, he begins to cry, as his mothers throat opens wide, he is catatonic, as she is raped by the one the boy now knows as psychotic. Her cavities are abused greatly, then reamed with a blade made of steel. She has been officially killed. The child watches his mothers carcass get torn apart by a vicious monster. Her cunt has been shred, her anus has been ripped, her tits have been torn by merciless jaws of a mutilating maniac! the boy has to watch the gruesome sight of his mother die! Poor child, just was released into the wild, with men that take what they want not just what they need! A murderous raping rampage fueled by greed! he is scared, and scarred, his little toy like heart was completely torn the fuck apart. Now he cries in the corner awaiting the cops. But he won't do much good, because he can do is rock, arms huddled to knees, tears flowing down his cheeks. Poor little kid. Lost his mommy to me.


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» Comments / Feedback
by maledeth (12-28-2004 - 11:38 AM)
Buy..is that gonna be one fucked up kid...Corporate....didn;t I tell you, you don't have shit on Geno! You dumb fuck!

by RavenChild (12-28-2004 - 05:51 PM)
It's good...so true....Corporate's going down. Alot of people are on your side Genocide. You got my vote of confidence.

by devilchild01 (12-28-2004 - 06:16 PM)
can i just watch from the side lines haha

by trulybroken57 (12-28-2004 - 08:10 PM)
all u guys, shut the fuck up about him, u dont know him, leave him alone, no one needs to pick sides, just give it up

by somethingcorporate (12-28-2004 - 09:41 PM)
do u actually enjoy stuff like that? i mean, i like stuff like "Flight of Icarus" and "War Pigs", but this is just disgusting and wrong. this isn't art this is shit. anyone can right stuff like this. it's mindless morbid garbage. why are you so obsessed with violence? so what if it's reality? you don't have to dwell upon it. "You're not an artist, you're a whore."

by Genocide Reaper (12-28-2004 - 09:48 PM)
Yes idiot. I like it. Is that a problem? That I don't fit into your common cliche? That I am not how you want me to to be? That I have my own mind and it is filled with morbid thoughts? Its not your place to judge right and wrong, moral and immoral. For man just said what he thought was right and wrong. not what he knew was right and wrong. Yes violence is good. "That which does not kill us, can only make us stronger." Do you see my point? And I don't just mean physically I mean Spiritually. But of course, you are probably an Atheist or Christian and don't understand me. Because you couldn't take the time to try and comprehend it.

by Trapezium (12-30-2004 - 11:44 AM)
Trulybroken, you shut the fuck up! It's best we don't know him. If you know someone you're a biassed, opinated, motherfucking heap of shit. Oh sorry, duid I just swear at you? Big fucking whoop. People either give up because they're losing or the fun has gone. The fun's not gone and Ty's far from losing. Disgust is such a weak word. People are called disgusting for picking their nose! Find stronger words, you'll need them. This is art. You're practically saying van gogh's sunflowers is art, but lostphrophets last train home isn't. It's all art, his words are artistic, meaningful, and truthful. Much more than what can be said for your pathetic, insolent jibes. It's better to dwell upon the turth, than dwell upon a lie. At least then you know what's right. Whore's can be artists, but in what way is he a whore? Artists can use dead people's body parts for fucks sake, they're still artists. It's called still life, but I think a more appropriate name would be still death *laughs* What is an immorality? Good to one is bad to another, yet there is no bad or god. There is merely two sides with opposing views.

by sarah10087 (12-30-2004 - 04:49 PM)
maledeth, haha, u succomed to the arse lickers, hilarious. i agree with the corporate, "it's mindless morbid garbage" that sums up geno's "talent"

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