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confused reality
written by trulybroken5704:50 PM 12/29/04in this deafening quiet,
and the blinding darkness,
with people who
pretend they care,
but really they just hate you.
i'm lost in a world,
stuck between confusion and reality.
please tell me,
what am i thinking?
crawl inside my mind
and decide
if i'm worth saving.
look behind
my tired eyes
and tell me
is there something there
that i don't see?
i'm lost in
a world not my own,
please tell me
where should i go?
guide me through
this confused reality. |
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do u ever feel like nothing matters, no one cares? please comment
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| » Comments / Feedback | by unpure_substance (12-29-2004 - 05:17 PM)
| very kool poem,i can relate |
by (anonymous) (12-29-2004 - 08:31 PM)
| this poem is deep......easy to relate |
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