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Last Words
written by blackened_rose
04:47 AM 12/30/04
I sat here on this bed
Next to my mama
And listened to what she said
Before she died
She said, come here my baby
And listen to what I say
For these words may someday
Come into play

Grow up my son, and be a man
Do the things you were born to do
And do all the things you can
For your love, and for you
Love someone some day
And don't live life so fast
You wont always know what to say
And baby, that's ok

She'll come to you one sunny day
It wont matter your riches or gold
But look at you in another way
One, that you were never told
You can find her if you try
Oh baby do this for me
For when you meet her don't you cry
And just let love be

For just be a simple humble man
And don't let your fears
Interfear if you can

Do something that you no you love
And don't you grow to fast
For this life was given from above
And for you, it was ment to last
Troubles will come into your life
But they wont last
They'll come and take you under
But you'll get up fast

Now I told you, when you were young
That I want you, my only son
To find away, to make everything fun
And when you have problems, don't you run
Get your first love
And hold her to your soul
For she's from above
And her love for you, is full

Make sure she'll love you forever
And don't let her hurt you
Fallow your heart forever
And this my son, you can do
All I want you to do my son
Is to be a man
And don't you ever run
For always do all you can

For just be a simple humble man
And don't let your fears
Interfear if you can

Then her hand fell from mine
And she left me all alone
And she left me to find
My way back home
For all these tears
Wont save me now
And these things we call fears
Wont help my soul

She will always be in my heart
Untill I meet her in the land above
For we can not be apart
For a thing to strong to break, is a thing called love
And I'll be a simple loving man
And I'll hold my love closely
In this land
And so lovingly

For all these gentle words
That came lovingly
Will fallow me like birds
As they whisper softly
For now I'll be a simple humble man
And I wont let my fears
Interfear if I can


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Um, I no that this most likely sounds alot like Simple Man by Shinedown. I didn't mean to, but I got the song stuck in my head and didn't no all of it, so I wrote my own lyrics to it. So, I don't all credit of it.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Psychoace (12-30-2004 - 04:54 AM)
thought provoking...

by blackened_rose (12-31-2004 - 03:51 AM)
What's that supposed to mean?

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