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ArseLickinHypocrites(4d geno fan club)
written by sarah1008704:44 PM 12/30/04They say they dont like to fit in
They like entering room, just brash in
They say they want to stand out,
But what they are and what they shout
Mean very close to nought
They say they are unique
Yet they hang around in cliques
They say they hate shit
But what they say and what they eat
are two very different things
They say they dont like others attention
But themselves are very quick to mention
They think they are anarchists
But what they are and what they think
are two very different things |
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an observation made from the "greats of this site"
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| » Comments / Feedback | by DragonWingedWolf (12-30-2004 - 05:00 PM)
| XD your funny AND suck...you realy should'nt insult others if you cannot even bring yourself to type ass corectly... |
by Genocide Reaper (12-30-2004 - 11:49 PM)
| Is that what you call structure? lmfao. Pathetic... And, where are these greats? Your little "clique" as you put it? *looks around* And as for me, I'm sitting here all alone bitch. I never asked for Fans. But hey, people recognize talent when they see it. I guess thats all I can say. I just started admiting it after I wrote 600 fucking poems and people still loved to read them. You on the other hand.....Where are all your fans? *looks around again* Oh thats it. Envy. I had almost forgotten, that you are a jealous little slut aren't you. ;) |
by lost_cause (12-31-2004 - 12:17 AM)
| You know what? You suck... And when people get attention on here it isn't necessarily because they want it... People love to write and get feedback... They aren't asking for a fan club |
by sarah10087 (12-31-2004 - 12:38 PM)
| If i was a slut, why would i envy a little boy whos obviously not getting any!! Lol. You cant even mention the -ve feed back on here cos its all ur fans that replied ;) so i'll wink right back at ya, i pity u, and ur diluded vision of life, and ur pathetic cronies. |
by Morbid Angel (1-4-2005 - 07:44 PM)
by Trapezium (2-13-2005 - 08:34 PM)
| If it's only his fans that have replied to his poetry, and he has a lot of comments, doesn't that show you he has a lot of fans? Because they appreciate art, why do you insist on mocking them? Why have you carried this on for so long? It was over, then you started it again. Why? because you have nothign else to do, and what better way for the attention-seeking-bitch to gain attention? |
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