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Death Benethe Lies
written by blackened_rose
02:48 AM 12/31/04
I thought that she could make it
But it looked like she was fakin'
I thought that she was brave
But her life was just takin'

She used her only body for money
And she thought she could make it again
But she fell further down in horrid
Deeper into this thing called pain

She asked me not to help again
And to just let her be
But I couldn't see her die again
And tried to just help her see


She told me that she always cut
And it seemed like she was liein'
She told me that she always bleeds
And there she was just diein'

She told me she used to feel
And I thought that she still did
She told me that she's grown so cold
And sold her soul at the highest bid


There must be something deep in your soul
That's gone so far wrong for you
She said she cuts and bleeds for me
But that's what I was trying to

There I was dieing for no reason
When she needed me the most
There her life started ending
When I all I did was fuckin' boast

She cut her soul aways for the last
She ended her sarrow and her pain
I hope that she's happy in Heaven
For in life she didn't gain a thang


She told me that she always cut
And it seemed like she was liein'
She told me that she always bleeds
And there she was just diein'

She told me used to feel
And I thought that she still did
She told me that she's grown so cold
And sold her soul at the highest bid


We thought everything was fine
But then she took her own life
We thought she was taking a different path
But she was on her last strike

How I will miss her for she's my only love
She was the one in my life that I trusted
How I will always look for her amoung myself
Her loss makes me so frustrated


She told me that she always cut
And it seemed like she was liein'
She told me that she always bleeds
And there she was just diein'

She told me used to feel
And I thought that she still did
She told me that she's grown so cold
And sold her soul at the highest bid

There she is diein'
There she is diein'
Diein'....


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» Comments / Feedback
by DemonSlayerSango (12-31-2004 - 02:52 AM)
Really great poem. I enjoyed reading it. Very well written

by Psychoace (12-31-2004 - 02:53 AM)
my fucking spine!!!!!!! oh well done it is better to be than to seem to be...

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