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» Poem: Shit! I fell in love.
Shit! I fell in love.
written by The grey raven
10:52 PM 12/31/04
Oh my god! What did you do?
You said those words!
But I love you too

You have chosen the worst time
Because you know
You can't be mine

I don't think that you have seen
These thoughts of you
Are killing me

I think of you all the time
But they are no good
I wish that you could be mine

I don't know what I should do
But know what to say
Shit! I'm in love with you


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I know its crap, but hey! Thats life!

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» Comments / Feedback
by (anonymous) (12-31-2004 - 11:11 PM)
I laughed my ass off throughout the whole thing. LOL! You rock! - Cameron

by aquaris (1-1-2005 - 01:57 AM)
i liked the humor in somthing so sad

by aquaris (1-1-2005 - 02:02 AM)
i love the way u can laugh at the litle lipshits(sucky things) life brings

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