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Sarah is the prime example of
written by Genocide Reaper07:10 AM 1/1/05| Speaking down upon me, like you know who I am. You are just another lamb. pulled around by a leash, the deceiver grasp the leather strap, tugging you in a direction he sees fit, you are so blind. Can't see shit. Swallow the bitter truth, the medicine that can heal, its called reality. Admit it, your another broken piece. Shattered glass swept across the floor. You don't have enough strength to make it out the door. Held back by the barrier, of your own disbelief. You constantly live in grief, no matter what you do, you can't find any relief. That's what you get, for giving up, that's where you end up, when you throw it away for nothing. You turn out with something that drags you down. Devise a plan to try and deceive my eyes, I know I can see better than you, for I see past all of your lies. All that you believe, fall in front of my feet. All that you wish upon me, is dead as a winter leaf. Dry and crumbling beneath the house of false hoods. Buried in the grave of your own self inflicted misery, your own self pity. The one that tries but can't pull me down, you can't snatch my crown, I will stand far away, and watch you from a distance, as you bring forth your own demise. |
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prime example of self destruction
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| » Comments / Feedback | by AmandaRenee (1-1-2005 - 09:09 AM)
| I really like it especially "your another broken piece. Shattered glass swept across the floor."
Beautiful
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by imustbedreaming (1-1-2005 - 01:36 PM)
| '' i see better than you for i see past all your lie'' .. madness ;) |
by imustbedreaming (1-1-2005 - 01:36 PM)
| '' i see better than you for i see past all your lie'' .. madness ;) |
by sarah10087 (1-1-2005 - 01:49 PM)
| another failed attempt to define me! I am not self pitiful, i pity you!! you seem to think life is about death! But surely your leaving out the most important part, the living,obviously u have not done much of this! |
by KaoticKitty87 (1-1-2005 - 04:16 PM)
| whats so great about living, all there is, pain, theivery, lies etc. everday you wake up for school or work and for what so you can make some money just to give it back to the greedy government, there is no point in living, I say skip this hell hole of a life and die..even then we are promised and eternity...it fucking sucks |
by Genocide Reaper (1-1-2005 - 09:56 PM)
| Well, at least you did one thing right. The use of real words. Its a start. Now you just need to wake up and realize, that no matter what, one day, you will die. Accept it. its a blessing. because this life is a test of spirit. You on the other hand, show how easily you will bend to some ones will.. What are they putting in your drinking water over there? Something that keeps free thought to a minimal? You went to a pub. Oh yes, drink, go ahead. Have a laugh, laugh it up while you can. Because one day, you'll be just another knocked up woman with her husband getting pussy elsewhere, your kids will more than likly grow up to hate you, because you'll tell them. This is as good as it gets. And you will lack the free thought to encourage them that anything is possible. Because from what you say. You are ready to accept what ever some one with more money than yourself. Tells you. |
by sarah10087 (1-2-2005 - 12:59 PM)
| Once again, you got me wrong. I do not accept whatever people with more money than me say because their wealthis often ascribed not acheived. I love life, the bitter twists of unhappiness make the ride all the more fun. Especially when i overcome it all. |
by XxheartbrokenxX (1-3-2005 - 09:26 PM)
| sarah, you are missing the point! Living is nothing more than waiting to die. Another thing is you cannot overcome unhappiness. Unhappiness is part of living,your never happy for more than a couple of hours. Do you understand? |
by sarah10087 (1-4-2005 - 07:18 PM)
| i undersatnd sense. something you apparently dont understand! Sure i feel alone, and unhappy, and miserable at times but dwelling on these feelings makes it worse! I'm not living to die! I living to live! when im dead thats it, nthing, dont dilude urself with religion, theres no after life, this is all you have so make the most of it! |
by KaoticKitty87 (1-5-2005 - 12:12 AM)
| irony would be that there is an afterlife, after all why wouldnt there be, god if there is one seems to love to watch us in despair so why no make us suffer through the eterny |
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