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» Poem: Mum, please back off!!!
Mum, please back off!!!
written by The grey raven
04:57 PM 1/1/05
'Clean your room'
'Don't stay up too late'
'You CAN'T have a boyfriend'
'Be back by eight'

Shut up mum
I'm fourteen NOT six
I can run my own life
no matter what you think

Can't you see
That being dropped off
At the party
is not what I want

Please back off
I just want to have fun
Youve been overprotective
for far too long

I know you care
But listen to this
You can't always treat me
Like a little kid


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My mum annoys me so much

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» Comments / Feedback
by gouldie_666 (1-1-2005 - 06:41 PM)
i feel sorry for you

by FeeFee (1-1-2005 - 07:18 PM)
ignore her

by call_me_death (1-1-2005 - 07:44 PM)
i know how u feel except itz not my mum itz my dad

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