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long, black train (please read)
written by trulybroken5706:47 PM 1/2/05there is
a long black train
that's come
to take me away.
as i look back,
and see you standing there,
i'll wipe a tear
from my eye
and continue on my way.
don't feel bad,
don't cry for me,
i need to leave
and go
far away
to find myself.
i get off the train,
i've reached my destination
of a place unknown
to man,
but still
i'm empty inside.
i look in the mirror
and i see
a lonely, tattered girl,
crying and forgotten.
this makes me sad,
for i will miss you,
yet i know
this is for the best. |
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someday i will leave, but not for awhile. please comment
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| » Comments / Feedback | by The Pope (Clayton) (1-2-2005 - 06:51 PM)
| I can relate... sometimes to keep ourselves, we must lose the one we love... |
by AthiestAnarchist (1-2-2005 - 07:51 PM)
| That was good...I liked it |
by _Anything_to_be_Loved_ (1-2-2005 - 08:15 PM)
| that was very beautiful... :) |
by somethingcorporate (1-3-2005 - 08:29 AM)
| i don't know if i'm right or not i'm retarded, but if i am, please don't dump me and please don't kill yourself. i just attempted suicide like i said and you're the only reason i'm living. if you kill youself i swear to fucking God i will. and if you dump me, please don't, you're all i have and like i said if i lose you that's it for me. but i guess that's your choice... |
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