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READ THIS! (especially tommy)
written by trulybroken5707:14 PM 1/2/05please no....
please don't go.....
i need you,
you keep me alive.
don't do this to yourself,
i can't take it anymore,
i'm crying,
i don't want to lose you,
you mean so much to me.
you told me you'd
stop hurting yourself
like this.
it tears me up inside,
this hurt that i know,
you feel it, too,
but don't give up,
please don't,
i need you,
i love you,
can't you see?
this hurts me,
please stop,
i can't handle this,
i want to make
your pain go away,
but i'm helpless,
what can i do?
i can't just act
like nothing's wrong,
this is killing me inside.
who could i
tell everything to
if you weren't here?
i would die
if it wasn't for you,
but you need to stop,
i will be here
for you always,
please listen to me,
tell me anything,
i don't want to lose you,
i love you |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
please... i love you, tell me anything, anytime you need, i will always be rite here. please comment
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| » Comments / Feedback | by AthiestAnarchist (1-2-2005 - 07:56 PM)
| it's got a lot of emotions...but, I can relate... |
by somethingcorporate (1-3-2005 - 08:32 AM)
| read my poem in response to this. |
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