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» Poem: You don't know me bitch
You don't know me bitch
written by Genocide Reaper
09:12 AM 1/3/05
You don't know what its like to be me, you couldn't comprehend my reasons for defiance against a will of excuse. These words, fly past your head, in my drunken rage I call out, and beat down the fucking failures until they shout. Hunting ghost, finding a soul, seeking a loss, finding the cause. Can you tell me what it is you see? I know you make up things to believe. I hear you tell me what's right and wrong, little person without any faith, just a dead end fate. Ready to fall, time for you to drop the ball. You can't score, you are just a toy, for reliving anger, beaten down over and over, becoming closer to pure torment through disdain. I AM ALL YOUR PAIN! ADMIT IT I"M THE ULTIMATE STRAIN. Decaying being you have become, you don't owe me, just thank me, I opened your eyes, to what you really are. A pauper to this world, a puppet to their will. And my own personal punching bag. Walk three miles in my shoes, oh wait, you couldn't make it. You've never known me, you just guess me. Doubt the game, that's what this life is! Even wasted I can tell you what it is you missed. Fragile glass you are broken piece that has been pissed away, down the drain you go, little pathetic strain, puppet, stain, fake, waste, dead end, you die in a ditch. Ignorant bitch.


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» Comments / Feedback
by CatGoddess (1-3-2005 - 10:03 AM)
This is a great poem and for someone who is druken you fucking write good and i can relate to this one.... keep writing

by sarah10087 (1-3-2005 - 09:33 PM)
In your struggle to define what someones life is, a "puppets" life, how then is your life different, the fact that you moan about it? Please.

by Genocide Reaper (1-3-2005 - 11:14 PM)
When have I moaned? lol Most of my work is third person

by sarah10087 (1-4-2005 - 07:14 PM)
"You don't know what its like to be me"sounds like third person! lol

by Genocide Reaper (1-7-2005 - 01:36 PM)
Wow.. I said you don't know what its like to be me. Thats not moaning, thats being truthful. Because you do not know what it is like. Are you me? or God? Or some spirit that lives within me? No. Then you couldn't possibily comprehend what it is like to be me.

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