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Americans
written by sarah1008707:37 PM 1/4/05Ah. We are the people of the United States
We make plastic people like plastic plates
We all live for that American dream
Wanting to be the best, we gleam
with the pride of our flag, and those stars
Clean enough to wipe my arse
For every egosentric critic you find here
Guarenteed theres more in America
The eccentrics who are all so fake
Fiiled with illusions only Americans could make.
Only 10% of them have passports, dear!
Like thats a bad thing! I dont want them here! |
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god dammit!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xtwisted_creepx (1-4-2005 - 09:17 PM)
| oooo very good piece of shit...
i am giving yoo critiscism if yoo dont understand
yoo seem to have a problem with my poetry..yoo seem to have a problem with me but all i no is at least i put heart into my poems...u hav not put ur heart into this poem |
by sarah10087 (1-5-2005 - 12:24 PM)
| haha, this is beyond heart. . .this is deep embedded hatred for those plastic people.
I have done "emotional poetry" but thats not the on;ly form of peotry, its not all about expressing ur wish to kill urself! |
by xtwisted_creepx (1-5-2005 - 12:45 PM)
| look im sorry but...i know its not al about killing urself and stuff but if that is how u feel then you shud rite about that..........
its just that you did mock two of my poems...i mean i no they were shit but its not like i want to be told that...............
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by xtwisted_creepx (1-5-2005 - 05:29 PM)
| well all i no is that im a nicer person then youll ever be....
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by sarah10087 (1-5-2005 - 08:33 PM)
| no, im just honest. I'm very compassionate really, just to those who deserve compassion |
by xtwisted_creepx (1-5-2005 - 11:51 PM)
| i hate yoo...yoo are aq bitch..you cant rite poems and you just like to piss ppl off....
you seem to hate anythink with feeling and heart in it coz u cannot rite anythink of that description urself...
i dont see why you hav a problem |
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