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» Poem: Saving you
Saving you
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
06:08 PM 1/5/05
Passed out, lying on the floor.
I want to give you my help and so much more.
If I just had the chance to be with you.
I'd erase all your problems and what you've been through.
We can help eachother through this thing known as life.
To make it out of here in one peice to know what love's like.
To make you understand that someone out there cares.
And that where ever you are I wish I could be there.
If I could just see you and touch your precious face.
I'd save you from everything, and take you away from this place.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I'll save you Dillon, I promise.

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by Keora the goddess of ice (1-5-2005 - 08:40 PM)
I love ur poem I thought that is was so true. I will be sure to read more. Keora

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