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Tell me you're okay
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk07:43 AM 1/6/05Tell me you're okay, when Im not there to make sure.
I'll try being everything I can be, including your cure.
This is hurting me more than you, I want you to stop.
I can't stand not knowing if you're okay or not.
I care about you strongly and think of you everyday.
So please, tell me you're okay.
That you're able to stand up on your own two feet.
That you're learing from all of this and begining to eat.
I'd gladly take your position, and starve so you'd be full.
But there's nothin I can do I feel so pitiful.
I want so badly to help, but I just don't know what to say.
Exept please don't do it, and tell me you're okay. |
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Dillon, What I would do to save you is infinite.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by swee (1-6-2005 - 07:48 AM)
| that was beutifull, is wonderfull to be able to care for some one so much. |
by spunkyrcks (1-6-2005 - 08:59 AM)
by X0xPaRiSx0X (1-6-2005 - 10:05 AM)
| dat was kool......i agree wit swee, its nice to have someone to care so much about...keep up tha good work :) |
by (guest) (1-29-2005 - 05:13 AM)
| very powerful...and i must add that thou art quite the accomplished poet! do tell...dost thou have a deviantart account? because i'd so befriend you there...
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