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Waking up wondering COMMENTS
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
11:09 AM 1/8/05
Get up form a long turning and tossing night.
Remembering no dreams, as I get blinded by the light.
The sun shines through my window glareing on my computer screen.
I wonder how your evening went last night but the truth not be seen.
You say you got sick agian, I hate picturing it.
It's hard to see you siting there, imagining this.
I'll die without you, the only thing keeping me alive.
When I dont hear from you the only thing I can do is cry.
Not knowing what happened or where you might be.
Where anorexia led you now, taking you away from me.
I'll go to sleep eyes wet and nose sniffiling,
wake up in the morning and begin my wondering.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I hate anorexia, for pulling you from me dillon. You have to be strong, dont give in.

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by {aiysha} (1-8-2005 - 02:44 PM)
I like it!~

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