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» Poem: Look Here She Comes
Look Here She Comes
written by blackened_rose
04:38 AM 1/9/05
I'm so tired of seeing you
And all the that you do
Here you come down the way
Walking like there's no today

Your looks hypnotized me
Made me so blind, I couldn't see
But I escaped your spell
Right before I fuckin fell

Look at what you saw
In her, there's no flaw
But trapped deep in her mind
Her soul she can't find

All the sanity in me
Has begun to leave me be
I've tried so hard to get it back
But in heart I seem to lack

*no thanks to you*

You seem so fuckin perfect
Just like a small glass doll
You laugh at me all the time
And make me further fall

How they all envy you
In all the things that you do
How can this be
Can they even see?

Look at your perfect clothes
And your pretty perfect face
You envy that bloody maganzine
Like it's an enchanted place

You've betrayed all you know
And all you'll ever be
How can you ever realize
All the hidden lies you'll be?

I used to love you more then life
I used to try and be you to
But how blind I was
To want to be you!

Soon you'll be what I've become
And you wont like it anymore
You'll look in shame of what you were
For our lives you have torn

You'll be apart of these shadow's
That I have come to love
You'll look at life another way
For something more then because

Three hours and it's cold
Your soul you've already sold
I can't stay were I don't belong
So here's the end of this song

Here in this shadow land
I watch in hate and envy
Your looks I have banned
For that I can no longer be

I am now longer lost
I am now gone with a cost
I give up further now
For you, I will bow


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» Comments / Feedback
by XpaperdollX (1-9-2005 - 05:01 AM)
I loved it great job!! I understand in my own way what your writing about. It's great!

by (anonymous) (1-9-2005 - 05:42 AM)
that is by far 1 of the best poems i hav evr read!!

by bay (1-9-2005 - 06:36 AM)
hey good one i dont know what to say it so good

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