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The sweetest thing COMMENT PLEASE
written by Tainted_Soul_77704:50 AM 1/9/05In my life there are confusing times. On my mind there are confusing feelings inside. What makes it better is the love you bring and that turns out to be the sweetest thing.
The things people do and the words that people say stab me like a knife, but of all the things that happened you're the best thing in my life. In these words I put in a lot of time and thought. In the hardest times in my life it seems like youre the only one Ive got. When you speak to me I remember every word. Cause when I hear your voice its the sweetest thing I've heard.
I always mess up and my life is sopose to be a simple plan. You're the only one who listens and the only one who understands. You'll always be the only one. If I was racing for happiness, I already won. When I look into your eyes Its seems like its all a dream. Cause when I see your face its the sweetest thing I've seen.
You speak to me and I never want you to stop Your voice is in my every single thought. Thinking about you when Im not with you, even when I am. Thinking about you constantly, anytime I can. I remember every movement everything we say. And since the beginning these things have never gone away. I will always see a picture of you even if I was blind. Because youre the sweetest thing ever on my mind.
Out of everyone I wish you'd always stay, please never go. Cause all thats in my life, youre the sweetest thing I know. |
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I love you Cameron
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Psychoace (1-9-2005 - 05:01 AM)
| "true love is forever"......... |
by Psychoace (1-9-2005 - 05:01 AM)
| "true love is forever"......... |
by Genocide Reaper (1-9-2005 - 05:35 AM)
by Cut_Wrist_Risk (1-16-2005 - 11:41 PM)
| I like that alot, it made me think about all the sweetest things in my life, and how they all come from one person. Nice job KalPal.-Cass |
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