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Broken Commet PLEASE
written by Tainted_Soul_77705:25 AM 1/9/05Trapped in my mind
Im left alone
Sitting here to rot
Way behond my breaking point
Im the only one Ive got
No one understands
No one ever will
Im frozen cold and broken
Im standing quite and still
Before I snap
Before I break
Beofre I fall off the edge
Theres something you should take
Heres my love for you
It has all turned into hate
And heres my life
I dont know why I should live
Heres my life
Its the only thing you havent yet taken, that I have left to give |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by psychoXemo (1-9-2005 - 06:32 AM)
| HEY!!!!!!! I think its realli good and since i usualli want people to leeve feedbak and they dont i noe i get mad so I juss wanted to be the first one who actualli left sumtin well GREAT job!!!! |
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