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» Poem: i can't take this anymore
i can't take this anymore
written by trulybroken57
09:18 PM 1/10/05
my throat is aching,
my head is pounding,
as i lay here crying
inside i'm dying.
i need someone
here with me now.
i'm so afraid,
for you......
and for me........
its all been
building up inside of me,
hidden deep down.
my fear, my pain
i can't take it anymore.
the tears won't stop,
i'm in a never ending nightmare.
no one sees
how much i hurt,
i can't hide it anymore.
my heart is bleeding,
my soul is black,
i can't take it anymore.
i need someone
to pour myself out to,
but i have no one,
for i don't want
to hurt you
by telling you
that you are
the reason for all
of my pain.
all these tears
that i cry,
night after night,
are for you.
loving you is killing me,
but it hurts so good.
i can't close my eyes,
for everytime i do
all i see
is you, bleeding and dying,
i can't take this anymore.
i'm trapped inside myself,
i need someone
to let me out
and save me
before all these feelings
make me unreachable


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
tommy, if u read this dont feel guilty, nothing is ur fault, i love you. please comment. (tell me how it makes u feel) thanx

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» Comments / Feedback
by RaddiSh22 (1-11-2005 - 02:44 AM)
really tommy none of it is ur fault .

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