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» Poem: please understand (plz read)
please understand (plz read)
written by trulybroken57
09:27 PM 1/10/05
does anything i say,
does it ever sink in?
do you understand
that without you,
i would be in peices?
i hope that you
aren't mad at me,
because i couldn't
just stand by
and watch as you
slowly died away.
i'm sorry.
does it matter
that everyone loves you?
do you even care?
when you don't respond,
i have to wonder,
are you even listening?
i'm sorry to doubt you
but i love you
and i don't
want anything to ever
happen to you.
i hope that you don't
shut me out now,
and feel like you
can't trust me,
because i will always be here,
and you can
always trust me.
please try to understand
that we are scared for you,
and i don't want to lose you.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i hope that you realize that we care about and love you. i would miss you terribly, i love you
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by liddle xxx punk (1-10-2005 - 10:42 PM)
i love it.....

by bay (1-11-2005 - 03:26 AM)
good

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