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Obscenity
written by blackened_rose10:37 PM 1/11/05Pity you lived for me
Pity you lived for her
Look at the things you told
Just to become a lier
You should have lived for you
You should have thought more
But you don't want to believe
For that's what's your bore
You want something obscene
Then look in the bloody mirrior
You think that you've got all you want
But that's your biggest terror
You don't lke the trueth
You don't like the facts
You think you've got all you need
But look at the way you act
Look at the drugs you take
And look at your way of life
Do you think that your happy,
If your on your last strike?
Laughter comes for you
And kills you even more
you think that your having more fun
But your life is such a bore
Tatoo's cover your entire body
Just like your lies cover your soul
Changing the color from good, to bad
Alcohol in you to the rim is full
Yes, your better off alone
Because of what you do
Look at what you say
And do unto you
You scream endlessly
To anyone near you
You think you've got it ruff
You in my shoes, see how you do
Where we live is horrible
It's never been a home
I try to help you in all
But listen to your tone
That's why I sit here
Knife in my hand
Looking blank inside
Empty and sad
Blood oozes endlessly,
And takes hold of me
I love the feeling of death
Just wish you could have seen |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Cat*woman223 (1-24-2005 - 03:00 AM)
| OMG this is great writing.The best i've ever seen!I dont want to seem rude but what would inspire you to write something like this?But i love it! |
by blackened_rose (1-28-2005 - 11:06 PM)
| Every single poem that I write, ties into my life. Every single piece of fear, anger, and loneliness, is what I hold dear. This poem is about my past. This is the way I express myself. Thanks, I'm glad you like! :) Keep up your writing also. :) ~Kath
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