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insanity's lonely song (plz comment)
written by trulybroken5704:10 AM 1/12/05take me away, far away
i don't ever wanna
have to feel again.
i don't want to die,
i don't want to feel,
feeling mans hurting,
and hurting is pain,
pain that burns deep
into my heart, and doesn't let go.
i feel insanity's ice cold clutches
latched onto my life,
i don't know what i'm doing anymore.
everyone feels it,
this anguish that tears away at your mind,
it doesn't let you rest in peace.
i need a solace, a place to
rest my weary head,
my head that's throbbing with this
anger, this resentment.
singing tearful songs of sorrow,
drowning in my sin.
i can no longer seperate
what's today, and when's tomorrow?
this insanity is taking hold
of all that's left of me,
a shell of what i once
thought i might be.
i can't seem to find a place
where i can be alone, yet not be so lonely,
i've retreated to a dark corner,
cobwebbed and full of dust,
i haven't been here for a while,
but yet i know that at one time i must,
for i remember the smell
of the aching, burning, breathing death.
it reaks of hate and dispair.
i seem to've lost my way,
i'm travelling this road to insanity,
alone, yet i'm being followed.
i long to fly,
rest upon a cloud
where soon no one will find me,
i will be lost forever,
trapped within this sorrowful song,
a wind in the trees, a forgotten melody.
this insanity is making me
forget the pain, the burning misery...
go.....
leave me here, alone to forget.......... |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is all i think about anymore, i just want to forget, to not think. please leave me comments
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| » Comments / Feedback | by noangel (1-12-2005 - 06:16 AM)
| yeah sometimes i wish i could forget too.
i liked the part about wanting to be alone but not lonely. sometimes being alone is the hardest, cuz that's when you remember everything.
U2U me sometime |
by sniper_killer94 (1-16-2005 - 04:03 PM)
| WOW that wuz awsome I loved it that wuz lik whao stop the fun bus wow i loved it yep that wuz awsome it is that exact way i feel it wuz the best it rocked the fun bus man that wuz awsome! loved it thanx Hi I'm Zoe momiya |
by !.:Retro:.! (1-19-2005 - 04:23 PM)
| Beautiful... A true reflection of the soul. |
by SmAlLsImPlEsAfEpRiCe (1-19-2005 - 05:41 PM)
| Taylor, isn't this the poem you wrote & brought to school? I really like it babe! Love yous!!! |
by Nuthinevermatterz (1-20-2005 - 12:01 AM)
| kool thtz gr8 man.. thtz exactly wut i feel... i'll steal ur poem ;p lol..0kAy.. I luv it...! |
by Nuthinevermatterz (1-20-2005 - 12:05 AM)
| kool thtz gr8 man.. thtz exactly wut i feel... i'll steal ur poem ;p lol..0kAy.. I luv it...! |
by lnlydrkangl (1-21-2005 - 04:14 PM)
| everyone wants to be able to not think abpout life or anything anymroe and i kno how ytou feel |
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