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Took a bullet for you
written by Genocide Reaper06:59 AM 1/12/05| I took a bullet for you, now you laugh in my face, like it never happened, its not like you weren't there the day I was put down by led, in that cold place, is it not enough that you have to put be down then piss on my crown. You aren't different from them, they are just the same as you, always playing fucking games, it wouldn't matter if I defused a time bomb in your bed while you were asleep and the reaper was sneaking upon your soul, about to take away all that you control and force you to pay the toll. You just hate me because I'm different from them. Choose your friends, and fallacy over me, ignore everything I say, whether I do the right thing or just stop and think you spit in my face, you can't see, that you were actually special to me. I'm always stuck cleaning up the mess you made, all of these memories seem to be like shattered glass laid out and then swept up with the past. I guess I should have saw this one coming, just like all my other plans in action, it could never last. Its always a gasoline fire, burning to fast, the flames covered my mind before I had a chance to put them out. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by eeyoresbuddy (1-12-2005 - 02:57 PM)
| Wow. I like it. It seems like you could change it into a song if you wanted(mainly because of the anger it's expressing). Very nice. |
by -Crimson_Defeat- (1-12-2005 - 03:55 PM)
| Wow. I love it. It flows so nicely |
by The_sad_girl (1-13-2005 - 06:40 AM)
by (anonymous) (1-13-2005 - 07:09 PM)
| wow...nice poem...i feel good for you in one hand where you have courage to say what you feel and feel sad for you in other..for having faith in a friend who has no heart..of gold.. as you thought...he or she did..bye ..and keep up the good work..do change the world with your poem..who knows..you might help some one in need...of ....influence.. |
by (anonymous) (1-14-2005 - 10:09 PM)
| Deborah.. kick ass pro keep on rocking Oi Oi |
by (anonymous) (1-15-2005 - 08:53 AM)
| wow i like it, very thoughtfull i like your work ive scanned through it and all ive read is great keep truckin |
by jinx666 (1-17-2005 - 10:13 PM)
| your poetry is amazing...i wish my poems were half as good as yours.lol |
by bitter (1-18-2005 - 07:45 PM)
by unpure_substance (1-18-2005 - 09:38 PM)
| this isn't that kind of poem you usually write about geno,but it's still an awesome poem |
by endless_suffering (1-19-2005 - 06:53 AM)
| It's different from what you usually write but it's a nice change....it's good |
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