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» Poem: Fade to Black
Fade to Black
written by SuperBob
06:45 AM 7/3/04
Stake a claim to my misfortune
Bask in the endless glory of my reign
King of the disemboweled and forsaken
Queen of the lonely, dead, and the shamed

Dancing for the freedom of this blackness
Making the symbols for these mourned
Harsh were the words of the lowly and meaningless
Bleeding were the lives of the forlorn and unborn

Decapitated the unwilling damned skies
Showed the darkness how to rebuild and forget
Incarcerated for the sorrow and for the lies
The wise words of the never before met

Learning how to build a new time-line
Forcing the winds to raise a blashpemous fire
The crows of the fields avoided the mines
The lacerations never failed their sire

Tortured for every under achievement
Left alone for the death of monogamy's sake
Never forgiven for any bereavement
Tied to a burned and unyielding stake



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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
sometimes my title dont really go...anyroad...no background..i was bored that happened...shitty...whatever..

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» Comments / Feedback
by imaginarypaperflower (7-3-2004 - 06:38 PM)
that's so good. i like it a lot. you have talent. keep it up.

by A Modus Operandi (7-4-2004 - 05:26 AM)
Well your title is a rip-off. The work is good...judging by your footnote, I have doubts of whether you wrote it or not. But, that's simply my opinion. Great work.

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