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losing you (i'm so afraid)
written by trulybroken57
08:22 PM 1/23/05
drained and foolish,
i still can't stop,
why am i so stupid?
why do you do this to me?
so distant, but yet you
are right next to me,
why must you make me
feel so awful inside?
i don't know how much longer
i can take this,
not knowing
how you really feel
do you understand?
do you even care?
it stings it burns,
but still i must,
for i don'twant to feel;
i'm scared, so afraid
of what might happen.
if i lost you
i wouldn't be able to take it.
do you need me anymore?
please don't leave me
standing here, all alone,
i feel so awful.
how could i be so stupid?
don't go...
my foolish pleadings
wouldn't be able to stop you
if you truly wanted to go,
but please don't.
some days i feel like
i'm losing everything,
you included,
those are my worst days,
but you don't seem to notice.
don't you see
the hurt in my eyes?
no, because you still leave me here
to fend off these
thoughts of loneliness
all by myself.
i don't want to lose you,
but i don't want your pity, either.
all i want is you


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i'm scared to death that i might be losing you, please, tell me, is it true? please.......
please comment

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