» Poem: Patience Bled Fiction |
Patience Bled Fiction
written by maledeth07:02 AM 1/24/05Lonely stance, I take.
Beneath the shimmering sky-filled grace.
I can feel you in my mind.
Touch, residing on my face.
I wait to make this be...
But is this calm just fooling me?
The winds blow out to speak.
Almost choked by limbs of trees.
Is this my fallacy?
Or can it be?
What a serene calm as I wait.
I see the stars asphyxiate.
My body trembles under me.
I need to know if this could be...
Lusters, bright from stars above.
Wish. One take to prove it love.
Matter be, will she ascend,
To serenity's comfort that I pretend?
The sky, obsidian with white diamonds.
Jewels to wed envy upon the scene.
The garden of roses that I had tend to,
All but petals torn like obscene.
What a serene calm as I wait.
Patience led to lie embrace.
Shivers claim the things I speak.
This is not the things I seek.
What a serene calm as the faint,
becomes a wish, disintegrate.
I can feel you in my heart.
Like piercing needles, sharpened shards.
I can't see you anymore.
Never did once before.
I believed that this could be.
Pehaps for you, but not for me. |
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ANother one I wrote when the poetry page was broken....I know..change of subject and all that...but, I think they are fairly good...what do you guys think? [ View maledeth's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 373 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by Acoustic Shadow (2-12-2005 - 05:59 PM)
I love it, Mike! You kick such serious ass! This is probably one of my favorite ones that you've done... |
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