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» Poem: I grow weak
I grow weak
written by SuperBob
06:31 AM 7/6/04
I hated how you got into me
And I hated how I let you be
Here, in my mind you lay
And there I've wished for you stay

We said we wanted more than this
But now you're gone and I don't miss
You were less talkative last time around
And that only made my dislike be found

When we interact it's different
Till then however, there's no commitment
I wanted to have a part of you
And time again you said you wanted it too

Yet here we are apart today
These thoughts keep leading me astray
I think things changed when we parted last
And I hope to test our new joining fast


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
beginning was off and the ending is worse...i am sorry for the bad quality....my writing has been off for a while

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