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» Poem: OUR FATE
OUR FATE
written by AthiestAnarchist
06:56 PM 1/30/05
Can't think
My mind - so clouded
Memories of everything I've ever doubted
You can't change my mind on what I'm going to do
No, you can't change me...not you
Everything you've said to me
Makes me want to scream
One way or another...it's not what it seems
I can't stop my mind from racing
I can't see what I'm facing
You and me I wish for so long for it to be
Now- barely talking on and off
It makes me sick...I want to cough
I felt like you just used my feelings just to hurt me
What ever...it'll be what it'll be
I'll see what happens between now and then
3 weeks...can't wait
That will determin our fate...
please...just let me be awake...


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by SuicideTheMime (1-30-2005 - 07:10 PM)
I like it. Keep writing

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