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» Poem: I'm sorry
I'm sorry
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
10:27 PM 1/30/05
I'm sorry, for not being the best daughter I could have been.
I'm sorry for not knowing how to be a loyal friend.
I'm sorry for hurting you,
even after what I've been through.
I dont know what went wrong,
but now everybody's gone.
I'm sorry for arguing and putting up a fight.
I'm sorry for making you regret me every single night.
I dont know how to make these situations better.
I have to erase these problems, so there's nothing left to wether.
I'm sorry im not perfect,
but nothing seems worth it.
I risked so many things in life,
I could have had an okay time but I'll never know what that's like.
I'm sorry I should of sucked it up and tried.
I'm sorry for giving everyone misserable lives.
I'm sorry for you crying your fake cries.
But most of all im sorry,
I was ever alive.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I dont know what to say, I want to help but i make everything worse by simply breathing.
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» Comments / Feedback
by boom_boom13 (1-30-2005 - 10:29 PM)
i think it's sad, but it's good.

by (guest) (1-30-2005 - 10:42 PM)
I completely understand, I've so been there. Keep trying..... ,BlackenedRose

by (guest) (2-1-2005 - 04:41 AM)
mary again, yes i agree with the first person who left u a comment its sad but it is good. alrite ttyl luv always

by death_of_night (2-1-2005 - 09:22 AM)
i understand where you are coming from...it is sad but this poem is very good

by loves2cut32190 (2-1-2005 - 11:40 PM)

by loves2cut32190 (2-1-2005 - 11:41 PM)
I love keep on writin its true life isnt worth living but we have to live cuz we cant leave those who love us behind

by (guest) (2-2-2005 - 04:13 PM)
I'm not sorry that you are alive, because if you werent i couldn't read this beautiful poem right now! Keep up the work!

by SexyLiLChic#13 (2-3-2005 - 02:22 AM)
Don't be sorry that you were ever alive because i am sure that the person or people who u have hurt love u no matter what u have done. You were no mistake because God put u on this planet and he has a reason for u to be here. Live each day to the fullest and just be you. Don't dwell on the past you can't change it but u can make the best of your present and future! if u ever need someone to talk to god is always there and he already knows what you have been through so u don't have to explain anything to him. He can help u all u gotta do is ask. And he will always love u no matter what you have done or do!

by (guest) (2-3-2005 - 05:29 AM)
I totally know how you feel!! i have the same problems!! this poem is awesome!! i love it!!!:)

by LP_Nirvana_Flintstones (2-3-2005 - 10:55 PM)
omg..that was absolutly brilliant, it describes exactly wat im going thru...u shudnt let them make u feel that way-i kno its hard tho x

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