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Suicide at sixteen
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk06:50 AM 2/1/05I was fond of you soon, it took no time at all.
Barely knew you, and my emotions began to crawl.
Into a place that has been empty for so long.
I didn't want to fall in love, but I was too far gone.
You swept me off my feet with every word you said.
You were the only person that made me feel like I wasent dead.
But as I was, you were in love to.
But sadly not with me, but I wished the best for you.
As long as you were happy that is all I cared about.
You said if you lost her you'd die, but I had my doubts.
But I never should of done that, think you wouldent die.
That very thing that seemed convincing, is what led me to cry.
You lost her or so you thought.
You sent me signals that I should of caught.
Your heart was split right in half.
You always thought she was the only one you'd ever have.
I feel that way too.
Exept not with her with you.
But now that you're gone I have no shoulder upon to lean.
All beause of your suicide at sixteen. |
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R.I.P DILLON SHARP
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| » Comments / Feedback | by cryptic_misery (2-1-2005 - 06:51 AM)
| i'm so sorry..................... |
by YoUrDeSiRe (2-1-2005 - 06:52 AM)
| You write excellent poems! |
by GeishaGirl (2-1-2005 - 06:54 AM)
| Crap the first poem on here that sent shivers!!!! |
by YoUrDeSiRe (2-1-2005 - 06:57 AM)
| ya a and the second one does the same |
by zver (2-1-2005 - 07:26 AM)
| ok this is all terrific but i guess nothing i said realy matters om not gona make fun of this poem cuz i wrote one about the topic- death is a blesing |
by DarkHuntress (2-1-2005 - 08:03 AM)
| wow i really like your poem, its so sad |
by good_times1390 (2-1-2005 - 08:27 AM)
| omg very very good poem :D |
by LostSoul013 (2-28-2005 - 09:56 AM)
| I really liked your poem. Its so sad...I'm so sorry about what happened |
by LostSoul013 (2-28-2005 - 10:44 AM)
| I really liked your poem. Its so sad...I'm so sorry about what happened |
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