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» Poem: Letting all go
Letting all go
written by mishy0077
10:50 AM 2/1/05
Staring at the ceiling, wondering why I'm here
Wondering why I'm alone, then my eyes shed a tear
But they shed no more, for I wont let them win
Death is merely drunken life, with a breath that smells of gin
I'm poisoning the air, I'm letting all die
I loose everything, then I sit down and cry
What have I done? I let it all slip away
Look at the havoc I caused all in one day
My breathing is heavy, I lay awake at night
I take a look in the mirror; what a depressing site
Masscara running, outlining my tears
Hiding in my eyes are all of my fears
These demons that posses me will never let me rest
Nothing around me makes sense, preventing me from being at my best
I feel so empty, as if I am dead
Don't even try to tell me it's all in my head
I'm slipping away. Down, down bellow
I guess there are things I'll just never know.......


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Hey, i like this one, i dont kno why. One of the very few I am proud of.

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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (2-1-2005 - 07:05 PM)
hey whats up matt dude i jus t want let u know man whatever u do man dont kill yourself man pulling the trigger wont make the nightmare end man it will just make it worse you just have to stick it out i knew i guy named mat i was in a band with him at one time but he ran away from home to but we still love him and hang out find your family man make some friends maybe even go to church man explain you life man it can get better but you have to put forth some effort live strong bro peace out.

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