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My first day without you
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
02:22 PM 2/1/05
As begins my first day without you.
Instead of wondering what you're doing, im wondering hwat your going through.
You took your life, and automatically sent to hell.
I love you so much and I wished you so well.
But everything was so hard you just couldent bare it.
You were so important to me I didn't want to hear it.
You didn't beleive I loved you, my feeling for you were so known.
Who leaves a 14 year old all on her own.
I should have been a better friend.
But now it's all over, it's done we've reached the end.
I didn't want you to be the first to go.
Ladies first they say, I should of let go.
You saved my life, in so many ways.
I wish I could of done the same.
I feel like a failure, there was something I could do.
BUt now I suffer my first day living without you.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I love you Dillon, I should of saved you....im sorry...

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