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» Poem: What You Couldn't See
What You Couldn't See
written by AthiestAnarchist
09:30 PM 2/1/05
Deep inside I feel the rage
I thought I could turn the page
Nevermind it...it will never be the same
I felt myself change
I used to care...I really did
But you changed me...
You did this but you can't save me.
This is just how things are going to be...
I'm sorry for all the trouble that I cause...
You just don't see how hard this really was
Deep inside I feel the sadness
Everyone though that I was fabulous...
Little did they know my emotional pain
I was so drained
Strained
Pushed a little too far...
I'm falling over the edge...one last time


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» Comments / Feedback
by Firesolved (2-1-2005 - 09:31 PM)
lol Nice usage of the word "fabulous"...

by boom_boom13 (2-1-2005 - 09:44 PM)
it really good l like it

by lucretta (2-1-2005 - 10:08 PM)
that woz really good. i like it! x x x

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