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» Poem: What you said ment so much(RIP DILLON)
What you said ment so much(RIP DILLON)
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
11:44 PM 2/1/05
Tears fall down, they never cease.
How much more pain can increase?
I feel so empty, so lost without you.
What's a lonely 14 year old girl suppost to do?
When her whole world stops...
Cause death came upon the only one she gots.
Nothing can cure this pain of emptiness.
Knowing his life was in my hands and I dropped it.
I let him go, and didn't know what to do.
Never felt so bad intill I lost you.
Spent half the day in the councelors office, but it made no affect.
I still feel like inside there's nothing left.
All I have now is the memories we spent.
I'll remember how much the things you said ment.


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by physcocmanson (2-1-2005 - 11:55 PM)
OMG thats so sad... i reacently had someone close to me die due to a drug OD im sorry for ur loss:( but very touching poem cuz i reminded me of my friend

by YoUrDeSiRe (2-2-2005 - 12:26 AM)
hey pshco u should read her other poems, they are really good

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