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Can't believe it
written by mishy007709:05 AM 2/3/05I can't believe I told you what you shouldn't know
I can't believe I told you the feelings that wont go
I can't believe I showed you what I truly adore
I can't believe I showed you something I couldn't love more
Something that makes me happy when I'm feeling sad
Something that makes me feel good when I'm feeling bad |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Its pretty shit, needs work. It's just a 'spur of the moment'. hmmmm coments would be nice. lol
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xxxvampire_loverxxx (2-3-2005 - 09:19 AM)
| Comments are great. Thanx for the one you left me. I like your poem because I connect with it. Great poem. |
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