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More Important
written by Tainted_Soul_777
12:01 AM 2/4/05
Take a good look in the mirror
And tell me what you see
You dont see what I do
You dont see what you could be
When you pick it up,
Remember the pain it bring
Why did you have to choose this
Out of all things?
I hate the people who make you upsett
And make you think that this is the way
I dont know what they do
And I dont know what they say
But I gotta let you know,
Its not worth it
All youre doing is taking our love
And you slowly hurt it.
You know I could never leave you
You mean too much
But is what youre doing more important
than our love?
When I look into youre eyes, I dont feel the same
Im worried that youll get hurt
And youll take your life away
It all slips away so slowly,
but Ill be here for you through it all
I feel so stupid you didnt tell me soomer and I couldnt see the writings on the wall
I hope my actions and words will finnally make you see
It just seems like your attiction is more important then me.


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This poem is about a girl with a boyfriend with a drug problem. Please Comment

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by thebrokenone (2-4-2005 - 12:05 AM)
addiction. =)

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