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This world is cold(pretty good!)
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
11:05 PM 2/4/05
Why'd did god take Dillon?
Why did he take my sanity?
Why did he take the only thing,
that ever mattered to me?
This world's a cold place,
how cold we'll never know.
But so terribly agonizing,
and so miserable.
I get sick when people complain it's getting so old.
You had it so much worse, this world is so cold.
These people are cold,
cold enough for someone to let go.
Let go of his life, at 16 years of age.
Now with him gone this world's a colder place.
Everyone's saying how they didn't know.
This world, these people, are cold.
This heart's cold inside,
colder and colder each time I cry.
I kept praying to god everyday,
but no matter what he always turned away.
With Dillon not here, it's hard not letting go.
This world, these people, this heart is cold.
These tears are cold as they touch my cheek.
They remind me how this pain will only increase.
That you're never comming back, is something I need to exept.
But your death was something, I never thought to expect.
Your pain here is over, but without you mine will grow.
This world, these people, this heart, my tears...
are cold.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Dillon Sharp R.I.P 10/31/89-1/31/05

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» Comments / Feedback
by physcocmanson (2-4-2005 - 11:19 PM)
like all ur poems ... this is awsome and just keep standing strong

by XsouredXfaithX (2-4-2005 - 11:34 PM)
your right that is pretty damn good

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