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please dont cut
written by suicide_penguin02:41 PM 2/5/05*today my best friend told me that she wanted to end her life.. i was once like her and i never knew how me saying i wanted to end my life hurt the ppl around, untill someone close to me wanted to*
It amazes me
All the lies you hold
The things you kept inside
in which no one you told
When you told me that secret of yours
On that bad but memorable night
I think about what you may have done
If we got into a fight
I do not like worrying about you
I hate being scared
I hate you held this from me for so long
and how you thought i did not even care
I wish you could understand
I care so much about you
But you have held so many things from me
I do not know what to do
It amazes me
how you deal with the dread in your life
how when something goes wrong
you run and pull out the knife
It scares me
that at any given moment
i could lose my best friend
I wish you could realize there is another way
then taking your life to end
I feel so useless,
to where i do not know what to say
Because i know this time
My words need to be more than its going to be okay
I understand your hurt
and if i were you i would probably do the same
If i could
i would take away all your pain
I love you, i love you, i love you
and i always will...forever!
Our friendship is something i cherish
for it is a treasure
So this is for all those people
who have friends that cut
who do not know what to say
it is the door they want to shut
For all those who cut
A friend thinks of you everyday!
and they want to help you
in each and every way... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Dark_Soldier (2-5-2005 - 02:44 PM)
| WOW! Very emotional it almost put a tear in my eye, Sorry about your friend, and I hope they can make it through. Great Poem! |
by XxXx-Fallen-Angle-xXxX (2-5-2005 - 02:48 PM)
| That poem realy touched me. I never thought about cutting like that. Now i know how my friends must feel when they see my cuts. I hope your friend makes it through. |
by AthiestAnarchist (2-5-2005 - 03:52 PM)
| Excelent poem. I myself have cut before and I saw what it did to all my friends. Now one of my friends is doing it seems every night and it wories me. I really hope your friend can make it though... |
by psychoXemo (2-5-2005 - 04:49 PM)
| WOW!!!!! now i must noe how my ex boyfriend feels when i cut were still best friends and when i read your poem everything you said about yur friend hes said to me once or twice in the past but ive stopped cutting =) and im reely proud of myself for that well all i wanted to say was that was A KICK ASS POEM>>>>>>>Identity |
by physcocmanson (2-5-2005 - 05:35 PM)
| ive cut for awhile, thought about suicide, but one of my friends purposely OD on coke to kill himself, because he thought no one cared. even tho he lost his life, he saved mine, because people do care, even if they dont act like it. Just remember that if ur are depressed and thinking about suicide, there are people that care...... I am one of those people, any one can talk to me bout there problems cuz i hate when people hurt... if u ever want to talk U2U me of AIM
i really liked ur poem, very heart felt and emotional
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