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» Poem: i miss you
i miss you
written by suicide_penguin
03:22 PM 2/5/05
I know how you feel
When you say
My best friend committed suicide on this very day
It happened to me
Without warning
She wanted to feel free
to think of no morning...
I miss you
With all my heart
I wish that I could have helped you
I wish we wouldn't part
I tried and tried
but I didnt do enough
I didnt tell your parents
I wasn't very tough
I wish I would have saved you
Its hard for me to know
I let you go...
Now people are crying
Crying because you died
crying because no one helped you
crying because you lied
I miss you
More than youll ever know
I miss you
More than I have ever shown...


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» Comments / Feedback
by Dark_Soldier (2-5-2005 - 04:24 PM)
Great poem once more...

by Fire_it_up_420 (2-5-2005 - 06:00 PM)
I just wanted to say if that poem was true about you I lost my best friend to and he commited suicide and i was sorry to hear that but that was a very good poem...

by (guest) (2-5-2005 - 06:00 PM)
i like i like

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