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STOP IT!!
written by suicide_penguin06:37 PM 2/7/05Stop doing what i used to do don't you have any since
I was a troubled kid i was always so tense
Put that knife down don't you get what your trying to do
Your gonna kill yourself and make everyone always feel down and blue
I am no gonna let you do this you are my best friend
I will never forgive myself if you die i will never mend
It's my fault I'm stupid i gave you the idea
Can you put the knife down your not being for real
What is wrong with you don't you see the pain you will cause
If you do this now you won't even get old enough to got through menopause
I understand now that your my reflection that i can't deny
So i guess this is how everyone else would feel if i died..
I just made it up off the top of my head my best friend has been cutting and i will kill her if she does it again |
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I just made it up off the top of my head.. haha its kinda weird
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| » Comments / Feedback | by XxXx-Fallen-Angle-xXxX (2-7-2005 - 07:17 PM)
| The poem is good. I'm sorry to hear about your friend. But i don't thin kyou should force her to stop cutting. I cut too and would like to stop but it is really hard. Hope she gets better. Good poem! |
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