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The Hang-nail
written by Orelinde08:26 AM 2/8/05I just want to rip you off.
You're irritable but I enjoy
the claret juice you graciously give.
Every time I use my teeth
and you tear into longer strips
until you’re finally off.
Now I await your return. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This was the "unconscious" style. No, I was not High or on any form of drug.
And this is REALLY about a hang-nail you dirty rats.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by zver (2-8-2005 - 08:28 AM)
| and they call me retarded hey ok ppl look at this atleast my shit is borderline funny or for some of u it makes u think or inspires u to insult me atleast it does somthing bu this is nor funn nor good nor interesting this is a waste of webspace |
by Orelinde (2-8-2005 - 08:33 AM)
| For your information Asshole, poems don't have to be funny, serious, or portray any one certain emotion. This poem is (obviously) about a hang-nail. People get them, its something in real life. So don't call my poem a waste of "webspace" it's free speech, and there's nothing wrong with writing a poem about something that people get in real life. Lots of poems represent life (unfortunately A LOT of poems are about suicide and cutting and "dark" shit) well I don't want to write like that, and I have no reason to. So I wrote about something small and simple. Almost everyone has had a hang nail at one point or another and they understand what it feels like. Give me a fricken break. |
by zver (2-8-2005 - 08:35 AM)
| i be glad to give u break in ur fukjing neck |
by darkflames (2-8-2005 - 08:44 AM)
| Man Zver! they is totally right. poetry writing doesn't gotta be funny or serious and anything like that. this right here, is a true poet, unlike you, fuck man you can't even spell!
anyways, i love your poems. great stuff. simple and easy to understand. unlike some of this shit *cough* zver *cough* |
by darkflames (2-8-2005 - 08:58 AM)
| i'd like to see things from your point of view zver, but i can't stick my head that far up my ass |
by devilchild01 (2-8-2005 - 12:38 PM)
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